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As we head towards spring, one of my regrets is that I don't seem to have managed to get a great deal of shots of the winter landscape that I'm happy with, and this one is no exception. Maybe it's just that I don't like the winter light – and that I'm trying to make these winter beach scenes something that they're not – or maybe it's something else, I don't know. Anyway, all that aside, I'm putting this one up as I do like the warmth of the evening light on the ironwork in the foreground, and I'm happy with the composition, it's just that there feels to be something missing.

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comment by Darren at 06:20 PM (GMT) on 4 February, 2006

Lovely. Great light and colours. Did you increase the saturation at all or is that just how it was ? The composition works nicely for me too.

comment by Robert #2 at 06:21 PM (GMT) on 4 February, 2006

I like the texture; I'm not sure what might be missing. Maybe you feel that you need something defining on the rusty piling to be the center of interest (like the bolt on wood a few days back).

comment by Robert #2 at 06:23 PM (GMT) on 4 February, 2006

Sorry for a second post - I clicked "post" by mistake.

I like how the top of the second post is level with the horizon-- it's holding up the sky.

comment by JD at 06:40 PM (GMT) on 4 February, 2006

I have no idea what your on about with something being missing from this shot its fine and dandy.

I'm literally amazed at all the different things there seems to be to photgraph where you are. I suppose it does have something to do with your eye for the shot too.
Sheffield (where i live) is pretty dismal for any focal point at all, but that doesn't stop me trying to capture it...

I think where you live does affect you photographs to some extent (eg you have lots of beach shots).
But do you think that you would ever get bored of these types of shots???
I don't think I would :-D

comment by tobias at 06:41 PM (GMT) on 4 February, 2006

Perhaps a little more context. Maybe not quite as close. Don't know, I still like it.

comment by chris at 07:03 PM (GMT) on 4 February, 2006

I've just recently discovered your blog and I have been completely amazed. You have an incredible talent with use of color and composition.

Your work is inspiring.

comment by nuno f at 07:16 PM (GMT) on 4 February, 2006

I understand what you mean, David. Somehow, the winter landscape and light conditions aren't the best for photography. I don't want to say that it is not good to shoot at winter. It's perfectly possible to make great photography during this time of the year. Here where I live, winter is very dull and I have to drive to somewhere else if I want to capture something more interesting.

About today's shot, I don't know why you say that there is something missing. Is all there... good composition, full of color, lots of details and very pleasing to the eyes.

comment by jasonspix at 07:29 PM (GMT) on 4 February, 2006

Great detail. Rusty things always make good subjects.

comment by Paul Woolrich at 07:38 PM (GMT) on 4 February, 2006

The evening light shining on this rusty post looks really nice. I agree about how hard winter can be to get shots your happy with. The problem is English weather, at least in other countries you can photograph snowey scenes.

comment by garyx at 07:54 PM (GMT) on 4 February, 2006

Personally, if I wanted to say winter then I would have been inclined to make this composition colder, more miserable and barren.

comment by garyx at 07:59 PM (GMT) on 4 February, 2006

Sorry DJN I posted before I had finished. I was going to say maybe zooming out a bit and shooting in b&w?

comment by Adrian Hudson at 08:24 PM (GMT) on 4 February, 2006

Dave,
I think your dissatisfaction with this shot is due to the composition. The viewer perceives that what they take to be a line of metal posts (although there are only two, the fact that this is a beach - its a safe bet it is a line). The eye therefore tries to follow the line of posts... the overused phrase "the eye is led into the image" comes to mind. The only problem is that there is notihing to be led to. The out of focus distance does not help. The in focus post is very interesting but not enough to hold the eye and prevent the "leading" into the distance and searching for the main subject.
My eyes won't rest in this image. It's quite unnerving.
Regards...

comment by djn1 at 08:51 PM (GMT) on 4 February, 2006

Adrian: I think you're partially right, in the sense that it would probably have been better had the second post been at least partially above the horizon.

garyx: I think you've hit the nail on the head, well, kind of. I guess the problem is that I didn't want to say winter, but probably should have done, and I guess this is what I was saying in my description of this one; i.e. that I'm attempting to portray the scene in a way that isn't entirely sympathetic to the circumstances.

comment by cj at 10:22 PM (GMT) on 4 February, 2006

Another photographer's image. Light, texture and colour. But not an easy one for a viewer. Adrian is right. Nowhere for the eye to rest. Yet for a restless image, an oddly empty one. It looks like it is trying to say something more than a stroll on the beach in the evening, but, to me anyway, is mute.

comment by Tushar at 11:04 PM (GMT) on 4 February, 2006

amazing....keep up the good work.

comment by Matt Simpson at 11:21 PM (GMT) on 4 February, 2006

This is pretty sweet. Then again, I might not be the best one to judge it because I am a whore for selective focus.

Did you up the saturation much?

comment by djn1 at 11:28 PM (GMT) on 4 February, 2006

Matt: I upped the saturation a bit, but not overly much.

comment by flying cow at 11:44 PM (GMT) on 4 February, 2006

fantastic colours. i absolutely love this.

comment by tad at 01:32 AM (GMT) on 5 February, 2006

delicious rust color!

comment by CurlyBoy at 02:34 AM (GMT) on 5 February, 2006

Wonderful image. I really like the mix of the left-to-right horizon with top-to-bottom rusty posts with a few other random rocks and debris that don't interrupt those nice lines.

Is there a third rusty post somewhere that gives it more of that repeating-post kind of look? Just wondering if the addition of a third vector to drag your eyes around the image would help it or hurt it. Don't know. Either way, you've got a great shot here. Nice work!

comment by maria at 04:14 AM (GMT) on 5 February, 2006

awww..it looks like its sunny in blackpool. its been raining like hell in vancouver for 2 months straight, not a speck of sun and today windstorms are bothering me. on top of that i have a flu and final exam for math on monday. its good to see the picture today becuase it looks like spring is coming soon :)

comment by Michael Sarver at 05:19 AM (GMT) on 5 February, 2006

lovely colors and composition!

comment by Mohammed Adenwala at 06:24 AM (GMT) on 5 February, 2006

Once again, awesome colors!

comment by Viking at 06:30 AM (GMT) on 5 February, 2006

Excellent color and detail. Reminds me of how my brakes looked before I changed them a couple weeks ago!

comment by rachael at 06:43 AM (GMT) on 5 February, 2006

I love the warmth. I doesn't look like a winter photo at all.

comment by robron at 10:11 AM (GMT) on 5 February, 2006

Love the picture, the foreground is very warm. Like the out of focus second post.

comment by Wolfgang at 10:51 AM (GMT) on 5 February, 2006

Great colours!

comment by Still at 10:59 AM (GMT) on 5 February, 2006

Just like a modern sculpture. Great light on the rusty colors.

comment by Lino Baschiera at 02:31 PM (GMT) on 5 February, 2006

Excellent, light, composition, all.

comment by djn1 at 04:17 PM (GMT) on 5 February, 2006

Thanks everyone – clearly this is one that you like a bit better than me ;-)

comment by Caryn at 05:51 PM (GMT) on 5 February, 2006

I have to say, I'm feeling a little relieved that you're not happy with the winter light, either. I've been having some difficulties as well. Or maybe it's just that I'm out more in the summer, with more photographic opportunities. That said, I'm loving the colors in this one, and the way the post in the background is an unfocused mirror image, giving it an impression of depth. Very nice.

comment by pooyan at 06:51 PM (GMT) on 5 February, 2006

nice work

comment by Manish at 05:41 AM (GMT) on 8 February, 2006

Hey !!!

Your work is excellent!!

Really your snaps come with great beauty.

Thumbs-up !!