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I have my own thoughts about this one, but before I say too much more about it I'd like to hear what you think.

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comment by James Darling at 11:17 PM (GMT) on 12 December, 2006

I can't see anything. Or is it minimalism?

comment by Piotr GeoS Galas at 11:18 PM (GMT) on 12 December, 2006

There are problems with image :/

comment by djn1 at 11:19 PM (GMT) on 12 December, 2006

James: no, it's me being an idiot ;-)

comment by James Darling at 11:20 PM (GMT) on 12 December, 2006

Better. Quite Scary, and actually not very appealing.
Sorry.

comment by djn1 at 11:23 PM (GMT) on 12 December, 2006

James: 'quite scary' is good ;-)

comment by Gabriel Loeb at 11:25 PM (GMT) on 12 December, 2006

Beautiful. I love the ratio. Very cool shot, David.

comment by andy at 12:02 AM (GMT) on 13 December, 2006

I like this one alot. Well done.

comment by Jamie at 12:56 AM (GMT) on 13 December, 2006

I like it quite a lot, but I'm wondering why you have so much empty space to the right. Seems like a little too much to me.

comment by Lynn at 01:28 AM (GMT) on 13 December, 2006

Bit too much empty space on the right, but some of it's definitely needed. Love the angle, I haven't seen it used on a portrait shot before.

comment by kevin at 01:31 AM (GMT) on 13 December, 2006

i like this shot alot. To me, the empty space at the right is perfect for this image. It makes you wonder what must be just beyond that space. To cut that space short would stifle its impact.

comment by Robert at 02:54 AM (GMT) on 13 December, 2006

It's cool. I find myself abstracting the shapes of her nose, cheeks, and chin until I see the eyes, then it snaps back to human form.
All that emptiness? Well, it doesn't *have* to be there, but it feels right.

comment by Joseph at 04:02 AM (GMT) on 13 December, 2006

I'm keen on finding out your opinion on it dave =)

comment by geckonia at 04:42 AM (GMT) on 13 December, 2006

YES! YES! YES!!!!!

comment by navin at 05:21 AM (GMT) on 13 December, 2006

Cool shot. The empty black space at the right of the image is adding to the charm of this picture

comment by Bill at 06:32 AM (GMT) on 13 December, 2006

I'm a sucker for large areas of white (or, you know, black) space. I like this one a lot.

comment by flying cow at 08:06 AM (GMT) on 13 December, 2006

the minimalistic approach and the perspective is funky. haunting, magnetic.

comment by Richard Trim at 09:00 AM (GMT) on 13 December, 2006

Without wanting to appear pretentious.... I love your intellectual camera angle ...!!!
Clever idea Dave... gives me food for thought.

comment by Jennifer at 10:41 AM (GMT) on 13 December, 2006

Yesterday’s, I realised later, was rather reminiscent of something Man Ray might have done – no bad thing! I think it was probably the lack of range (as pointed out by Jamey) and maybe film might have handled the eye area better – I don’t think the 20D does dark bokeh brilliantly (mine doesn't - or is that just me?!). Like today’s tone and range better and the really interesting crop but I did love yesterday’s composition.

comment by Andy at 11:55 AM (GMT) on 13 December, 2006

Wow this is really cool, although it does look as though it's been taken for an advertisement - with all the space on th right ready for marketing speak

comment by riesenriel at 11:58 AM (GMT) on 13 December, 2006

Like the composition of this portrait. This way of framing I like very much.

comment by m1979 at 12:01 PM (GMT) on 13 December, 2006

suggestiva foto

comment by P.J. at 05:54 PM (GMT) on 13 December, 2006

That is a really cool portrait. I don't think I've ever seen anything like it. Nice job!

comment by stian at 06:00 PM (GMT) on 13 December, 2006

Nice shot. Different, but in a good way :)

comment by iPka at 06:03 PM (GMT) on 13 December, 2006

Contrary to popular belief, you're on a hot streak.

comment by Dorowski at 06:24 PM (GMT) on 13 December, 2006

I love the idea. Well done, too!

comment by Rich at 07:18 PM (GMT) on 13 December, 2006

Excellent - am in total agreement with Navin, Bill, Kevin, et al. I love to attempt shots that are off angle or off centre and this one's doing it for me! :p

comment by Arthur at 08:00 PM (GMT) on 13 December, 2006

Can’t help feeling that that amount of negative space works better in white than black, as dramatic as black is. To me, at least, it’s Rubin's vase the ‘wrong way around’...

:-)

comment by chiara at 08:08 PM (GMT) on 13 December, 2006

I love the composition!

comment by m i k e b at 09:36 PM (GMT) on 13 December, 2006

it is photo's like this that remind me why i love negative space so much. well done david.

comment by Roy at 09:37 PM (GMT) on 13 December, 2006

It's interesting with the weight of black to the right; turn it through 90 degrees clockwise (or even anticlockwise) as convention might dictate and you get a totally different feel.

comment by djn1 at 10:20 PM (GMT) on 13 December, 2006

Thanks everyone.

Joseph: oddly, I wasn't sure about this one when I posted it, but it's grown on me as the day's gone on.

Jennifer: I've not experienced any 'dark bokeh' issues, at least none that I'm aware of.

Roy: I did rotate this shot – several times – but decided that I much preferred it this way round.

comment by Deb at 11:18 PM (GMT) on 13 December, 2006

I'm surprised no-one has mentioned 'A Clockwork Orange'. I'm not implying your gorgeous daughter is a brolly-wielding, psychopathic, Beethoven freak....rather, it's the lush lashes....(and a glint in the eye ) that, in conjunction with the menacing void beside her, is vaguely reminscent of a rejig of that iconic poster. The eyes draw you in, siren-like, but it's the abyss that she's framing that seems the biggest pull (Cue Nietzsche) :|

It's a perfect example of the negative volume of space delineating and illuminating the salience and beauty of the positive and I love the whole composition.

comment by Mo Hashim at 04:57 AM (GMT) on 14 December, 2006

I have no clue what Deb above me is trying to say, but I think I'll just say I agree.

David, I like this picture. And I like the fact that your back in full form. you kinda had us worried with that little disappearing for self reflection stint. but with the new baby coming, new joys anticipated, new life is coming within you. And for that I'm greatful.

keep up the fantastic work. This is classic chromasia.

comment by paul georges at 10:02 AM (GMT) on 14 December, 2006

great composition dude, wonderful!

comment by brecht at 11:05 AM (GMT) on 14 December, 2006

great angle

comment by Kyle at 12:54 PM (GMT) on 14 December, 2006

This belongs on a gray wall in some public space at 5' wide.

comment by Deb at 02:59 PM (GMT) on 14 December, 2006

Don't worry, Mo. I quite often leave myself in that position too. :) But, heck, don't agree with me, then! I might be suggesting something incredibly offensive re. DJ's work ;)

(It wasn't though; I save that for face to face meetings...just to see the total "am I bovvered?" look)

comment by Mário Ferreira at 07:08 PM (GMT) on 14 December, 2006

Sorry, but this all black space is nothing: neither equilibrate, n. aesthetic, n. pleasure; only a snobist experience, nothing more.

comment by Santhosh at 06:53 AM (GMT) on 15 December, 2006

So graceful and love the composition of this image.

comment by Wild Horse at 11:01 AM (GMT) on 16 December, 2006

抽象的面部,黑色的空间给人更多的想象。我同意这样的构图形式。与众不同的形态。

nonfigurative ,the dark space bring some imagination.

i am agreed it,just a different form。

comment by Eduardo at 02:29 PM (GMT) on 16 December, 2006

GUUUAAA!!!
iNCREÍBLE....!!!!
Definnitivamente es el mejor photoblog...pues siempre vuelvo a él....felicidades
Sobre la foto.... gran conposición, muy original y gran manejo de la iluminación.

comment by Psychodudu at 12:21 AM (GMT) on 18 December, 2006

Anybody but you, Dave....would get slated for posting this. Still, that is why you da MAN!
I agree with an earlier comment that it looks ripe for being pasted straight onto an advertising hoarding...
It reminds me of something Quant might have used.

comment by mooch at 11:37 AM (GMT) on 21 December, 2006

I really like this. A unique composition and I really like the negative space. Has a great sense of atmosphere. Seems to extend into nothingness and thus gives me the viewer a sense of awe.