We were out shooting portraits today, and while I'm not entirely convinced I composed this one as well as I should have done, I do think it's a moment worth sharing.
captured camera lens focal length aperture shutter speed shooting mode exposure bias metering mode ISO flash image quality RAW converter cropped?
12.18pm on 7/2/07
Canon 5D
EF 24-70 f/2.8L USM
70mm
f/4.0
1/60
manual
n/a
evaluative
100
580EX
RAW
C1 Pro
5x4
comment byROB at 11:14 PM (GMT) on 7 February, 2007
The close crop works well for me - shows off the intamacy of the moment.
Maybe its my monitor, but it appears a little dark of something.
comment byKatie at 11:18 PM (GMT) on 7 February, 2007
A magnificent moment in time captured splendidly. I agree its a little dark, but I think it adds to the intimacy. How precious.
comment byKatie at 11:20 PM (GMT) on 7 February, 2007
Unrelated sidenote: I noticed that in my browser at least (Firefox)the increase size and decrease size options in the bottom of the comment text area have opposing arrows. Increase is pointed downward and decrease, up. Just FYI.
comment bynferreira at 11:36 PM (GMT) on 7 February, 2007
To tell you the truth, I think that the composition is too tight. But it was a moment that speaks for itself and emotions, in this case, are more important than composition. :-)
comment by3amfromkyoto at 11:44 PM (GMT) on 7 February, 2007
Damn this is good...
comment byPsychodudu at 12:48 AM (GMT) on 8 February, 2007
This is dynamite. The pureness of this moment brings a lump to my throat. A little dark, and I'm not so sure your DoF is how you intended it be, but hey....what the heck do I know?
comment byRobert at 03:09 AM (GMT) on 8 February, 2007
I think you may be too hard on yourself. As ROB noted, the close confines of the frame are intimate and warm.... lots of feeling. It reminds me of childhood and the feel of my dad's stubble when he hugged me. The contrast in skin tone are just an added bonus.
comment by Sharla at 04:47 AM (GMT) on 8 February, 2007
I agree with your comment on the composition but sometimes the subject is far more important.
comment byMarkDM at 05:04 AM (GMT) on 8 February, 2007
I actually like the way this is lit. It allows, almost forces, the viewer to focus on the baby's face. Very nice moment, David.
comment byP.J. at 06:33 AM (GMT) on 8 February, 2007
You've caught an excellent moment here. Black and white works perfectly.
comment byToxic Lens at 07:33 AM (GMT) on 8 February, 2007
Touching... I'd really like it in sepia.
comment byJump at 08:02 AM (GMT) on 8 February, 2007
this is one of the sweetest photos I have ever seen! so emotional, expressive! great!
comment by Jennifer at 08:37 AM (GMT) on 8 February, 2007
Wonderful comp, but would have liked a little more light on Dad's face - prob would have missed the moment if you'd arsed around with lighting though!
comment bylasiate at 12:23 PM (GMT) on 8 February, 2007
superbe travail sur la profondeur de champ même si ça n'aurait pas été mon choix. Très belle image d'amour paternel.
comment by Richard Trim at 02:47 PM (GMT) on 8 February, 2007
Haven't you thought 22 ...this is the 21st century!
comment by m at 04:19 PM (GMT) on 8 February, 2007
:-) On an lighter note!! One of your commentors needs to get out a little more.
comment byriesenriel at 04:44 PM (GMT) on 8 February, 2007
Just lovely... great framed.
comment by Jennifer at 04:49 PM (GMT) on 8 February, 2007
Hmmm - looks bril on the laptop - think I have monitor issues :-(
comment byseawitch at 04:56 PM (GMT) on 8 February, 2007
I like it a lot. There is something in the Dad's face that invokes the feelings of tenderness, love, and joy that parents feel.
comment byJaynee at 10:24 PM (GMT) on 8 February, 2007
This has nothing to do with today's picture, but two nights ago here in South Carolina we had the most amazing sunset - just drop dead gorgeous. And my first thought was, "I wish Chromasia was here to capture this on film because it will never be this beautiful again."
comment byRyano at 10:59 PM (GMT) on 8 February, 2007
1 word for me... Beautiful!
comment bydjn1 at 10:59 PM (GMT) on 8 February, 2007
Thanks everyone, and my apologies for the racist comment that appeared earlier. I've now deleted it.
We were out shooting portraits today, and while I'm not entirely convinced I composed this one as well as I should have done, I do think it's a moment worth sharing.
camera
lens
focal length
aperture
shutter speed
shooting mode
exposure bias
metering mode
ISO
flash
image quality
RAW converter
cropped?
Canon 5D
EF 24-70 f/2.8L USM
70mm
f/4.0
1/60
manual
n/a
evaluative
100
580EX
RAW
C1 Pro
5x4
The close crop works well for me - shows off the intamacy of the moment.
Maybe its my monitor, but it appears a little dark of something.
A magnificent moment in time captured splendidly. I agree its a little dark, but I think it adds to the intimacy. How precious.
Unrelated sidenote: I noticed that in my browser at least (Firefox)the increase size and decrease size options in the bottom of the comment text area have opposing arrows. Increase is pointed downward and decrease, up. Just FYI.
To tell you the truth, I think that the composition is too tight. But it was a moment that speaks for itself and emotions, in this case, are more important than composition. :-)
Damn this is good...
This is dynamite. The pureness of this moment brings a lump to my throat. A little dark, and I'm not so sure your DoF is how you intended it be, but hey....what the heck do I know?
I think you may be too hard on yourself. As ROB noted, the close confines of the frame are intimate and warm.... lots of feeling. It reminds me of childhood and the feel of my dad's stubble when he hugged me. The contrast in skin tone are just an added bonus.
I agree with your comment on the composition but sometimes the subject is far more important.
I actually like the way this is lit. It allows, almost forces, the viewer to focus on the baby's face. Very nice moment, David.
You've caught an excellent moment here. Black and white works perfectly.
Touching... I'd really like it in sepia.
Really lovely picture
this is one of the sweetest photos I have ever seen! so emotional, expressive! great!
Wonderful comp, but would have liked a little more light on Dad's face - prob would have missed the moment if you'd arsed around with lighting though!
superbe travail sur la profondeur de champ même si ça n'aurait pas été mon choix. Très belle image d'amour paternel.
Haven't you thought 22 ...this is the 21st century!
:-) On an lighter note!! One of your commentors needs to get out a little more.
Just lovely... great framed.
Hmmm - looks bril on the laptop - think I have monitor issues :-(
I like it a lot. There is something in the Dad's face that invokes the feelings of tenderness, love, and joy that parents feel.
This has nothing to do with today's picture, but two nights ago here in South Carolina we had the most amazing sunset - just drop dead gorgeous. And my first thought was, "I wish Chromasia was here to capture this on film because it will never be this beautiful again."
1 word for me... Beautiful!
Thanks everyone, and my apologies for the racist comment that appeared earlier. I've now deleted it.