This is the last shot from this small series and I wish I could tell you that it was intentionally out of focus, but I focussed, and then Finley ran off – which isn't uncommon behaviour for him. With the benefit of hindsight though, I don't think it would have worked if it had been in focus, at least not in the same way.
Let me know what you think. I'd also be interested to know which of the six was your favourite.
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I'm afraid this one doesn't speak to me. There's not enough "story" or "feeling" accessible in the photo itself for those who didn't experience the moment firsthand. By far, my favorite of the six holiday shots is the "finger in the mud" photo of FInley. The one in which he's pointing toward the tree is my second favorite.
comment by moonhead at 08:32 PM (GMT) on 27 July, 2007
I suppose if I had taken this (with over 5 grands worth of equipment in my hand) I would have been a wee bit disappointed with the result as it looks like its been taken on a 50.00 camera phone.
Saying that, images do not need to be technically perfect to be good. My partner thinks the shot is cute and that's all that matters! Many photographers probably wouldn't have posted this image as they are too concerned with technical details (and getting negative comments!) so I congratulate you. This is what photography is all about.
Out of the series of six shots my favourite is holiday #1. Its the eye contact that speaks to me.
comment byAlice at 08:49 PM (GMT) on 27 July, 2007
Although I usually don't particularly care much for photos that are out of focus (whether intentional or not), I do think this one is really nice. Something about the space to the right, the blurriness, and the body language of the little guy I find very appealing. He looks like he's on a grand mission. Cute shot!
comment by roy at 09:01 PM (GMT) on 27 July, 2007
#1 closely followed by #5 for me
comment by Jennifer at 09:14 PM (GMT) on 27 July, 2007
Obviously not your typical bloke - most would have said this was the look they were going for ;-D A little serendipity here - it does work well IMO.
comment bymikelangelo at 09:56 PM (GMT) on 27 July, 2007
Of the six, this is my favorite. followed by #5. I really like this one, but I can't explain it. I really like the feel of this one. Composition is great. Normally soft focus kills me, but it works well. I could see this one treated with a little grain to enhance the feeling I get.
comment bythukai at 10:21 PM (GMT) on 27 July, 2007
#1 by far! Then this one, but a distant second I must admit. This is still a great shot though, it's just that #1 apeals to me more.
comment bymahan at 07:26 AM (GMT) on 28 July, 2007
I like it. It has a very cinematic quality about it (in both the 35mm film sense and the movie sense). Sometimes images like this, which are not technically perfect, really remind you of the potential that photography as a medium holds. There is a sense of nostalgia in this shot which coupled with its B&W PP and the blurred vision creates a strong visual impact (and possible a narrative one too?). I prefer this one.
Rhys.
comment by fm100066 at 05:18 PM (GMT) on 28 July, 2007
there isn't a fair to judge the best of 6 but on its own, this stands out, capturing a fleeting moment. perhaps nostalgia as mentioned best captures this moment, of a young one, racing towards a finish line on a road that only hints of a long way ahead provides a haunting effect that is comfortable with me. Despite its out-of-focus, it is vivid and striking in the way it hits you. cheers, this is GOOD.
comment byfrancesco at 12:32 PM (GMT) on 29 July, 2007
This is more emotional than the others.. bad it is out of focus... the #1 is the best IMHO.
comment bytiberiu crisan at 01:26 PM (GMT) on 29 July, 2007
the previous one is my favourite, the one with pointed finger, but this one has "something" special - maybe the atmospehere
comment by maxine at 01:56 PM (GMT) on 29 July, 2007
#1 for sure. Just love the way you and this little girl connect to each other moment and produce amazing pics!
comment by Courtney at 01:15 AM (GMT) on 30 July, 2007
I love it, there's just something about it that draws me to it. It's amazing.
comment by kate at 02:38 AM (GMT) on 30 July, 2007
love the blur. spontaneity. looks like he's running away from home. no suitcase packed w. wonder bread/pb and j. no blankie. just full out "making a break for it". the arms/hands are incredible. favorite.
comment by Natalia at 08:24 AM (GMT) on 30 July, 2007
Those little legs have a long journey ahead of them - life journey. I love his confidence. Great photography!
comment bynavin at 08:43 AM (GMT) on 30 July, 2007
I like this shot even if it is out of focus. Wish I could let my sone run around like this.
comment by Mr Bombastic at 09:47 PM (GMT) on 30 July, 2007
What the hell are you people smoking? "Add grain to enhance the feeling I get"?... "Amazing"?... Yowzers!
i'm really bothered by the entire image being out of focus, especially since you admit that you meant for it to be in focus. shooting kids is hard, and i toss over half my images because of this exact reason. if i had this i'd have tossed it. that's not to say that it wouldn't have been great if it turned out how you wanted. the fact that it's blurry also makes it look flat to me, since the subject matter is already dark in addition to blurry. it's a shame because i like the composition and the road seemingly starting an ascent into the sky. better luck next time.
i was won over by staring at the shot of finley poking a puddle. i didn't like that at first either, but i came around and i think i like it best. i'm not coming around on this one though. sorry.
As for the blur: I honestly think it works for this shot.
comment by doreen at 07:12 PM (GMT) on 31 July, 2007
#1 and #3 are my favourites. i can't pick between the two
comment byMarkDM at 07:31 AM (GMT) on 9 August, 2007
Of the six, this is the one that made me smile, so it's my favorite. It would have worked fine in focus, but it's nice this way, too. Looks like he's headed for the finish line. A well-captured moment.
comment byRodion Kovenkin at 08:37 PM (GMT) on 19 August, 2007
so many comments.... positive.... and not such.... someone like it... someone not... someone saying that he/she knows all 'bout this .... i only know that i like this photography very much... it has story... it is wonderful ...
comment byPolly at 07:42 PM (GMT) on 25 August, 2007
yeah. i think it's wonderful.
comment byTom K. at 04:04 PM (GMT) on 31 October, 2007
This is the last shot from this small series and I wish I could tell you that it was intentionally out of focus, but I focussed, and then Finley ran off – which isn't uncommon behaviour for him. With the benefit of hindsight though, I don't think it would have worked if it had been in focus, at least not in the same way.
Let me know what you think. I'd also be interested to know which of the six was your favourite.
camera
lens
focal length
aperture
shutter speed
shooting mode
exposure bias
metering mode
ISO
flash
image quality
RAW converter
cropped?
Canon 1Ds Mark II
EF 70-200mm f/2.8L IS USM
200mm
f/2.8
1/640
aperture priority
+0.0
evaluative
100
no
RAW
RAW Developer
minor
I'm afraid this one doesn't speak to me. There's not enough "story" or "feeling" accessible in the photo itself for those who didn't experience the moment firsthand. By far, my favorite of the six holiday shots is the "finger in the mud" photo of FInley. The one in which he's pointing toward the tree is my second favorite.
I suppose if I had taken this (with over 5 grands worth of equipment in my hand) I would have been a wee bit disappointed with the result as it looks like its been taken on a 50.00 camera phone.
Saying that, images do not need to be technically perfect to be good. My partner thinks the shot is cute and that's all that matters! Many photographers probably wouldn't have posted this image as they are too concerned with technical details (and getting negative comments!) so I congratulate you. This is what photography is all about.
Out of the series of six shots my favourite is holiday #1. Its the eye contact that speaks to me.
Although I usually don't particularly care much for photos that are out of focus (whether intentional or not), I do think this one is really nice. Something about the space to the right, the blurriness, and the body language of the little guy I find very appealing. He looks like he's on a grand mission. Cute shot!
#1 closely followed by #5 for me
Obviously not your typical bloke - most would have said this was the look they were going for ;-D A little serendipity here - it does work well IMO.
Of the six, this is my favorite. followed by #5. I really like this one, but I can't explain it. I really like the feel of this one. Composition is great. Normally soft focus kills me, but it works well. I could see this one treated with a little grain to enhance the feeling I get.
#1 by far! Then this one, but a distant second I must admit. This is still a great shot though, it's just that #1 apeals to me more.
go to the freedom! :D
I like it. It has a very cinematic quality about it (in both the 35mm film sense and the movie sense). Sometimes images like this, which are not technically perfect, really remind you of the potential that photography as a medium holds. There is a sense of nostalgia in this shot which coupled with its B&W PP and the blurred vision creates a strong visual impact (and possible a narrative one too?). I prefer this one.
Rhys.
there isn't a fair to judge the best of 6 but on its own, this stands out, capturing a fleeting moment. perhaps nostalgia as mentioned best captures this moment, of a young one, racing towards a finish line on a road that only hints of a long way ahead provides a haunting effect that is comfortable with me. Despite its out-of-focus, it is vivid and striking in the way it hits you. cheers, this is GOOD.
This is more emotional than the others.. bad it is out of focus... the #1 is the best IMHO.
the previous one is my favourite, the one with pointed finger, but this one has "something" special - maybe the atmospehere
#1 for sure. Just love the way you and this little girl connect to each other moment and produce amazing pics!
I love it, there's just something about it that draws me to it. It's amazing.
love the blur. spontaneity. looks like he's running away from home. no suitcase packed w. wonder bread/pb and j. no blankie. just full out "making a break for it". the arms/hands are incredible. favorite.
Those little legs have a long journey ahead of them - life journey. I love his confidence. Great photography!
I like this shot even if it is out of focus. Wish I could let my sone run around like this.
What the hell are you people smoking? "Add grain to enhance the feeling I get"?... "Amazing"?... Yowzers!
i'm really bothered by the entire image being out of focus, especially since you admit that you meant for it to be in focus. shooting kids is hard, and i toss over half my images because of this exact reason. if i had this i'd have tossed it. that's not to say that it wouldn't have been great if it turned out how you wanted. the fact that it's blurry also makes it look flat to me, since the subject matter is already dark in addition to blurry. it's a shame because i like the composition and the road seemingly starting an ascent into the sky. better luck next time.
i was won over by staring at the shot of finley poking a puddle. i didn't like that at first either, but i came around and i think i like it best. i'm not coming around on this one though. sorry.
He really has a "I'm walking here!!!" attitude! :-)
Thanks all.
As for the blur: I honestly think it works for this shot.
#1 and #3 are my favourites. i can't pick between the two
Of the six, this is the one that made me smile, so it's my favorite. It would have worked fine in focus, but it's nice this way, too. Looks like he's headed for the finish line. A well-captured moment.
so many comments.... positive.... and not such.... someone like it... someone not... someone saying that he/she knows all 'bout this .... i only know that i like this photography very much... it has story... it is wonderful ...
yeah. i think it's wonderful.
An instant classic.