This is a follow-up to the firework shot I put up the other day. At the time, I wasn't sure that I liked this one, but after playing around with it for a few days I decided that it was probably worth putting up, not least because it's a slightly unusual take on this theme. Personally, I find firework shots great fun to shoot, but it's so easy to end up with a clichéd result that I'm not often keen on any of the shots that I get.
Anyway – as always – let me know what you think.
captured camera lens focal length aperture shutter speed shooting mode exposure bias metering mode ISO flash image quality RAW converter cropped?
8.58pm on 14/9/07
Canon 1Ds Mark II
EF 24-70mm f/2.8L USM
30mm
f/16
1/5
manual
n/a
evaluative
100
no
RAW
C1 Pro
2x1
comment by Sharla at 07:35 PM (GMT) on 18 September, 2007
I think to appreciate this shot is to not know it is of fireworks. If examined for the lit strings/spark trails and drifting mist/smoke, overlaid with a train trestle or pier, the mystery and lack of explanations are very powerful. The right angles between the white lines and the "clouds," bisected by black, is a very strong and rare compositional element. I love this as much as anything in a long time (and I'm very fond of your work).
comment byPeter at 07:58 PM (GMT) on 18 September, 2007
wow, I like this shot a lot. Unlike Sharla, I'm not sure knowing it's a firework photo detracts or not... it's a definite mind-bender either way, and telling that it's a firework shot is basically like pulling a trump card over all other fireworks shots ever taken, since they all basically look the same.
comment by Malcolm at 08:01 PM (GMT) on 18 September, 2007
Is this the 'different' fireworks shot you've been seeking? I like it a lot; almost graphical black & white, and the panoramic omposition suits it well. I bet it makes a great print, if printed large.
I like it a lot, Dave, and I think it's actually a different fireworks shot. It has some kind of "industrial" and cyberpunk mood, with a strong feeling of mystery. I love the desaturation and the smoke fading out and merging with the darkness. Bravo!
comment by Saito at 12:12 AM (GMT) on 19 September, 2007
This definitely needs the black background. It took me a while to figure out was the picture was, so I think that that's a good thing! A good photograph should make you linger and think-- like a good painting!
comment byDave C at 12:24 AM (GMT) on 19 September, 2007
This is really good, Dave. More impressionist & artistic than your usual stuff: you should do more of these. Technology is best used when it creates an 'organic' feel which you've definitely captured with this shot. :-)
comment byGary at 06:24 AM (GMT) on 19 September, 2007
Very cool. I had no idea what it really was. Felt sure it was rain or water spray of some sort.
comment byJennifer at 09:13 AM (GMT) on 19 September, 2007
You certainly wouldn't look at this and think fireworks - floodlit rain or welding on a grand scale maybe! A very arty and mysterious shot - love it.
comment bysteven meert at 10:10 AM (GMT) on 19 September, 2007
Fantastic picture. It looks very dramatic and threatening to me. The combination of the lines and the smoke works really well.
comment by Norbert Avaya at 04:42 PM (GMT) on 19 September, 2007
I thought it was a bus stop in the rain when I first saw this image. Do you ever worry that sometimes it becomes more about post-processing and less about photography for you?
comment bydjn1 at 07:02 PM (GMT) on 19 September, 2007
Thanks everyone.
Norbert: no, that doesn't worry me, mostly because I don't really see the taking of a shot it's post-processing as different things - both are necessary. Sure, sometimes I'll spend more time post-processing a shot that could have been better taken in the first place, but generally speaking I see both stages as being integral to the final result.
This is a follow-up to the firework shot I put up the other day. At the time, I wasn't sure that I liked this one, but after playing around with it for a few days I decided that it was probably worth putting up, not least because it's a slightly unusual take on this theme. Personally, I find firework shots great fun to shoot, but it's so easy to end up with a clichéd result that I'm not often keen on any of the shots that I get.
Anyway – as always – let me know what you think.
camera
lens
focal length
aperture
shutter speed
shooting mode
exposure bias
metering mode
ISO
flash
image quality
RAW converter
cropped?
Canon 1Ds Mark II
EF 24-70mm f/2.8L USM
30mm
f/16
1/5
manual
n/a
evaluative
100
no
RAW
C1 Pro
2x1
I think to appreciate this shot is to not know it is of fireworks. If examined for the lit strings/spark trails and drifting mist/smoke, overlaid with a train trestle or pier, the mystery and lack of explanations are very powerful. The right angles between the white lines and the "clouds," bisected by black, is a very strong and rare compositional element. I love this as much as anything in a long time (and I'm very fond of your work).
wow, I like this shot a lot. Unlike Sharla, I'm not sure knowing it's a firework photo detracts or not... it's a definite mind-bender either way, and telling that it's a firework shot is basically like pulling a trump card over all other fireworks shots ever taken, since they all basically look the same.
Is this the 'different' fireworks shot you've been seeking? I like it a lot; almost graphical black & white, and the panoramic omposition suits it well. I bet it makes a great print, if printed large.
I like it a lot, Dave, and I think it's actually a different fireworks shot. It has some kind of "industrial" and cyberpunk mood, with a strong feeling of mystery. I love the desaturation and the smoke fading out and merging with the darkness. Bravo!
This definitely needs the black background. It took me a while to figure out was the picture was, so I think that that's a good thing! A good photograph should make you linger and think-- like a good painting!
This is really good, Dave. More impressionist & artistic than your usual stuff: you should do more of these. Technology is best used when it creates an 'organic' feel which you've definitely captured with this shot. :-)
Very cool. I had no idea what it really was. Felt sure it was rain or water spray of some sort.
You certainly wouldn't look at this and think fireworks - floodlit rain or welding on a grand scale maybe! A very arty and mysterious shot - love it.
Fantastic picture. It looks very dramatic and threatening to me. The combination of the lines and the smoke works really well.
I thought it was a bus stop in the rain when I first saw this image. Do you ever worry that sometimes it becomes more about post-processing and less about photography for you?
Thanks everyone.
Norbert: no, that doesn't worry me, mostly because I don't really see the taking of a shot it's post-processing as different things - both are necessary. Sure, sometimes I'll spend more time post-processing a shot that could have been better taken in the first place, but generally speaking I see both stages as being integral to the final result.