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I thought that I'd gone through all the train shots that I'd taken the other day but then I came across this one. I'm not entirely convinced this works, but it's an example of a kind of reflection shot I've been working on so thought I'd put it up. Basically, the technique I've been trying out is for manipulating very flat images; i.e. ones with very little contrast, and involves applying an almost vertical Curve to the image.

What I like about this technique is that it renders almost imperceptible aspects of the original scene visible. What I'm less sure about, and less confident about controlling, is the noise. Normally, a shot taken at ISO 200 is relatively noise-free, but when you increase the contrast this much it becomes much more visible. In the full-res' version this looks ok – almost as though this was a painting – but it's a bit less convincing at this size.

Anyway, let me know what you think.

Oh, and the converted RAW file is here:

.../archives/the_space_between_us_2.php

As you can see the end result isn't much like the original ;-)

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comment by tanner at 07:42 PM (GMT) on 9 April, 2005

A rather plain image, if you ask me ;)

Alright, I know that was lame. But, your site isn't working properly.

comment by djn1 at 07:54 PM (GMT) on 9 April, 2005

tanner: thanks, I posted the entry before adding the link to the image. It's fixed now.

comment by Adriana at 08:02 PM (GMT) on 9 April, 2005

well I know what your talking about. i've done that and yes, increasing the constrast makes even the little noise it may have, more visible. For me, seeing the plain image gaves another perspective of this one. I can not say that one is better than the other I just see them as complement to each other. By the way Your last two post were really good. :)

comment by nogger at 08:08 PM (GMT) on 9 April, 2005

"What I like about this technique is that it renders almost imperceptible aspects of the original scene visible."

Yes, it does. But, well, did you see this when you took the shot or is it after the event fiddling?

Not that I'm against after the event fiddling, I do it all the time and most of 'em end up in the bin, I was just curious as to how your photo and thought processing goes.

As for the image itself, well, I think I'm gonna have to come back and look at it some more. Not sure what it does for me yet.

comment by djn1 at 08:11 PM (GMT) on 9 April, 2005

nogger: in general I know what I'm after when I take the shot – which aspects of the scene I'm subsequently going to emphasise – but because the original scene is very flat it's a bit of a hit and miss process.

comment by chris at 11:36 PM (GMT) on 9 April, 2005

the "high contrast" version somehow adds extra motion to the image for me. The double reflection from the window layering becomes closer to motion-blur, much more so than in the RAW.

comment by Anonymous at 12:30 AM (GMT) on 10 April, 2005

This should be called a Digital Image not a photograph... I don't know It just bugs me when people use photoshop too much.

Do you use a tripod or monopod for these or is it just handheld? I love the motion blurriness

comment by Fellow Eskimo at 03:13 AM (GMT) on 10 April, 2005

Thats good tuning in PS...but I prefer yesterdays image to this one. This one just seems to have less focus (literaly too...).

comment by Juice at 05:23 AM (GMT) on 10 April, 2005

The noise seems to add to this one, because it doesn't really seem like noise. I like that it's also patchy, there is much less noise on the tracks than in other areas.

I think the sepia is what makes this work. Sepia just seems to make the contrast jump and everything sort of elevates.

comment by riff at 06:41 AM (GMT) on 10 April, 2005

gritty. i like it..

comment by joan at 07:53 AM (GMT) on 10 April, 2005

I don't know anything about noise or photoshop, but I find this photo moving. Relaxed, beautiful hands, fleeting moments. We all know these things.

comment by Mihael at 10:31 AM (GMT) on 10 April, 2005

pretty suggestive...

comment by Don Colin at 02:59 PM (GMT) on 10 April, 2005

OPINION STATEMENT: David this is one of those shots that appear on your roll or card that is part of a sequence of more interesting shots, but you are inclined to find in it, something that is missing from your more "successful" shots. It happens all the time. What I like about photoblogs is that we have time and space for these "missed moments". This one is very nice. The toning adds the "enough" needed to bring this shot into the realm of exhibit. Too many people believe Photoshop to be some kind of mockery of the actual; bah, I tend to believe that everything we shoot is plastic and mallable. That's what our imaginations do with our visual field. Good shot.


Don Colin


http://www.shadowmold.org

comment by pedro at 04:56 PM (GMT) on 10 April, 2005

doesn´t look a digital image to me...i think you could get pretty much the same result in a dark room(if you where shooting film,of course), without putting your hands in PS.
really like it...a lot!

comment by m at 08:13 PM (GMT) on 10 April, 2005

Not my favourite by a long way, but it was very good to see the original. Would the noise have differed in a colour version?

comment by vivien at 08:29 PM (GMT) on 10 April, 2005

why dont you make a documentary about how to behave in a train or so... i like those pictures, but i think there could be more change on this site.
but if you want to make topics or so, it's ok.
id like it if you would post more colorful images like some flowers or something like that.
i mean, hello, its springtime!

comment by djn1 at 09:41 PM (GMT) on 10 April, 2005

Thanks everyone.

Anonymous: I'm not sure that it's a distinction I'd make: post-processing is a part of my creative thinking and I don't think there's a line that you cross between photography and digital images; i.e. they're one and the same.

comment by chinomikan at 10:50 PM (GMT) on 10 April, 2005

Hm.. this image has a lot of contrast compared to your original one it definately has its brightness to it.

Qiuck question, what are you representing with your streaked lines?

Lin. : )

comment by Rob Prouse at 02:48 PM (GMT) on 11 April, 2005

I kind of fall in the camp of people that feel that you pushed PS a bit too far on this one. When I first saw this image, it didn't really grab me. I just clicked through to yesterday's image. I think it is a case of not really having enough to start with. I think the technique of pushing the curves to this extreme might be valid for some shots if that was the vision you had when taking the photo, I just don't think it was worth it for this one. How's that for sitting on the fence ;)

BTW, the shots of your kitchen reno were great.

comment by Joseph Spurling at 04:41 PM (GMT) on 16 April, 2005

Photoshop should be used however an artist feels will help create the image that he/she is searching for - it's no less a real photo. There should be no such thing as 'too much PS'.

I really like this. It's a sad photo, at least it makes me feel sad (probably not helped by the depressing music i'm listening to)